Great, just great.
The drawing was awsome, especially the perspective at the beggining. The animating for the most part was good. The lipsyncing was,... okay, but it needs improvment. But I can see how animating detailed mouths would be difficult.
The voicing was pretty good, but the acting wasn't too hot, although it was above acceptable. The script was good, but it got just a tiny bit boring after awhile. And I believe this is a pretty original idea.
Good job overall. 5/5 - 10/10
Me neither, but I'm okay
The drawing was good, so was alot of the animating. And yes, the lipsyncing was pretty bad. You should move the parts of his mouth and add details, not just resize it. Your teeth aren't always exposed when you speak. There are tutorials that can help though.
It was a tad bit short for a music animation, though.
4/5 - 8/10
Great, A Cinimatic Feel
It was great. I think the voicing was good, but it is hard to tell with other languages. But at the end, the perspective of the voice of the guy in the car was not good, you should have made him yelling, then faded down the volume to simulate distance. But that is just a small thing.
The drawing was good, I like your style. I especially liked the shading. Although the animating was off on alot of parts, it was pretty noticable on alot of parts, but only if you pay attention. And as I know, animating in Full Body very, very difficult.
Also, the story was great. Although it mimiced something of a public service announcement for anti-alchoholism.
Overall, great work!
5/5 - 10/10
This song isnt all that melody, and the drums dont stand out at all, you could keep them at the same volume if they were more punchy.
I like the breakdown at 1:20.
The arpish melody you have going at about 2:45 is okay at first, but it just stopped going with the rest of the song throwing it off.
The melody at 3:30 is pretty good.
At 4:00 the plucks just seem random, dont get me wrong, it didnt sound out of tune, but there still wasnt any melody-like correspondance.
The gate at 5:30 is kinda spazy, which is actually good for that part, it just should have had more variation.
Overall this song was okay, the reason its just okay is because the song jumped around so much, I know that was your intention, but it makes the song unmemorable because you cant get 7 different beats stuck in your head, and for that matter not even one because there wasnt a whole lot of progression or catchy melodies.
5/10 - 3/5 - Keep working
Thanks for your input, although I guess you didn't understand what I meant by 7 parts (7 memories) I wasn't getting you to try to remember the beats, it's more of a feeling based song, but I guess that's alright. Again, thanks for your input ^^ .
Jumps around alot
It's like the beat couldn't make up its mind as to what direction it is going to go, so it just goes everywhere. The synth is okay, is it sytrus? When you add the second melody while the first one is playing, it gets out of tune pretty bad. The melody isn't that bad. The drums are pretty good, but make them sound different.
Here is some ideas, buy (or torrent) VEC3 (Veangence Essential Clubsounds Vol.3). It has tons of drums and shit. You'll love it, I use it ALL THE TIME.
Also, buy (or torrent) Nexus, it will give you the synths you have always dreamed of. Also, you can download the Vanguard demo, which doesn't cut the sound or give you a time limit.
Search around KVR Audio (google it) for VSTs (If you don't know how they work or how to install them, I can help). If you have any problems I would be happy to help.
Add some more stuff, like bass, arps, and pads, then this would be even better,
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