Great, just great.
The drawing was awsome, especially the perspective at the beggining. The animating for the most part was good. The lipsyncing was,... okay, but it needs improvment. But I can see how animating detailed mouths would be difficult.
The voicing was pretty good, but the acting wasn't too hot, although it was above acceptable. The script was good, but it got just a tiny bit boring after awhile. And I believe this is a pretty original idea.
Good job overall. 5/5 - 10/10
Me neither, but I'm okay
The drawing was good, so was alot of the animating. And yes, the lipsyncing was pretty bad. You should move the parts of his mouth and add details, not just resize it. Your teeth aren't always exposed when you speak. There are tutorials that can help though.
It was a tad bit short for a music animation, though.
4/5 - 8/10
Great, A Cinimatic Feel
It was great. I think the voicing was good, but it is hard to tell with other languages. But at the end, the perspective of the voice of the guy in the car was not good, you should have made him yelling, then faded down the volume to simulate distance. But that is just a small thing.
The drawing was good, I like your style. I especially liked the shading. Although the animating was off on alot of parts, it was pretty noticable on alot of parts, but only if you pay attention. And as I know, animating in Full Body very, very difficult.
Also, the story was great. Although it mimiced something of a public service announcement for anti-alchoholism.
Overall, great work!
5/5 - 10/10
Somewhat depressing, but in a good way
This really made me think alot. It's to early to say what, but my thoughts are running wild by watching this.
Slighty mind bending & ery
I believe this animation constitutes the ways of creation of us, and the earths past. Make of it what you will, but that's what this stands for to me.
I will elaborate.
It provides an alternate to evolution as a medophor.
It means that we could possibly have been created by a robot.
In a less literal sense: What we believe, even with what facts we do have, can be very different from reality. Just because it makes sense doesn't make it any more likely from anything else. Reality is just a word that means "what we think is possible, impossible, true, and what we think happened". Reality is only what WE experience in THIS environment, but there is many places unseen, therefore what we think doesn't really constitute anything of actual relevance, it is only a thought of a insignificant being.
Summary: Just because we believe it, and it makes sense, doesn't make it fact.
And yes, the claws movements were not synced very well.
Other than that it is just great.
9/10: because it wasn't all that mind bending, nothing completely stood out and grabbed me. Possibly due to the lack of anything deeper then medophors.
Thanks for the review! This is the only real interpreting feedback I got from anyone! I don't really go for "grabbing" my viewers rather than just intriguing them, but 9/10 is more than fair and I'm happy that you thought of it worthy of such a rating. I'm glad that someone thought about it and actually came up with something. :D
*Robots and Medophors*
Unoriginal, and a tiny bit geeky. (But very good)
I mean it was awsome, I gave it a 10. But some elements of it came off like anime. Sorry for those who like it, but I despise it. Although the animation at times was breath-taking. I love the credits. Awsome how you added many from SPP.
The part where the blue guy (whoever he was) sat on the floor (you know, the >.> and <.< part), was pretty funny. One of my favorite quotes is "Shut up Hyun, men are talking". lol
Keep going, but seriously, come up with something original. These type of animations have been done 987 times or so. Give this genre of animation a break. You would think for your birthday you would do something you don't normally do. But regardless, it was still good.
I hope to see you doing something original. Like one with a story, and possibly actual talking and faces.
The animation was so damn fluid?
Amazing effects, and the sounds weren't over-used and repetetive either.
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